2.0 UPLOADED Chapters 1 & 2 Complete. PLAYABLE

Hello everyone!

2.0! is ready for people to play/test and provide feedback on the story/game etc.

Chapters 1 and 2 are done so the game is finally in a good playable state.

There are 3 non cannon endings for you to find.

There are 2 paths with branching choices to find.

This is my first ever game/project.  I am doing this all by myself. Writing the story. Coding the game. Editing sprites/sourcing sprites, Made all the game music myself. Created Title screens myself etc.

I really would love for you to try this out now and give me some feedback.

I hope that you like my story and you enjoy playing what I have made as much as I have enjoyed making it.

The project is not even close to being done yet. Chapter 3 will be the biggest one yet. I hope to have it completed by the end of August. So i can move onto my other fully voiced project.

Please download the game and try it for yourself. 

I look forward to hearing from you all.




Thevrgirl-2.0-win.zip 157 MB
Jul 20, 2019

Get The VR Girl - Visual Novel


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Hey there, I just played your game, usually I'm not one for games with a male protagonist (If it is not BL), but I saw you on Twitter and got interested, so here are my thoughts:

The music is wonderful, it gives a nice atmosphere to the different scenarios! Also I really loved some of the backgrounds too!


There are many, many writing errors, (Just to mention one right in the beginning, you wrote "I wish you was here" which should be "I wish you were here") so you should definitely let somebody else read over it again and correct those.
It can happen that we don't see our own mistakes when writing, that is why it is essential to have at least one other person proofread (which should in that case be native english), don't let it bring you down, it happens to all of us. I have read that you have been working on this project all alone, and I think that is impressive. Keep up the good work, and I'm curious to know how this story will end. 

Hi Kizunue. 

Thank you for taking the time to play my early version of my game. Thank you for enjoying the music, for me the music is the main part of the game, since that is the one thing (apart from 1 song) that I am making 100% myself. The English mistakes?, well If i had a talented proof reader or spell checker then it might not be much of an issue.  Your not the first person to tell me about the intro and should be were not was", for me the character thats talking I felt was, well was more appropriate. I knew that it was not the correct way to go about it, however I appreciate the constructive feedback and I will take it under advisement.  I am looking for someone to proof read everything before I finish it, so I am aware that my English is not spot on. Considering the last time I wrote anything story wise I was 13 and I dropped out of school at 16 due to RL circumstances I never went back to learn or improve my English skills. That being said, I am really enjoying writing this story and I am glad that so far at least you are enjoying it. As for the male protagonist Tom and Theo are not really the stars, yes the story is about them, but the real hero and the main protagonist is Ruby. Shes the kick ass hero in my Story.  

Question did you find the bad endings? did you find the path with the letter and the path with the mums backstory?. Just wondering :)

Anyway I am grateful for any and all feedback and I will strive to improve my game and I am working hard on writing chapter 3 now and bringing the story together a bit more.

If you can read through my bad English haha

Thanks again for your time and feedback, i really do appreciate it.



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Yeah, at the beginning it seemed like it would be a male protagonist^^

I have found the letter. 

I'm looking forward to your next chapter :)