Hi all.

I did not think I would get this uploaded today.

I spent most of the day on this today to get it uploaded Today.

I am going to take a small break like a few days then I will start work on Chapter 2.

Chapter one is now complete!

Here are the changes from the previous version 1.0c

• Dialogue overhaul - everything has been improved and altered to improve story quality
• Sprite Transitions are now smooth and work as intended
• All scenes now feature all characters in question. No longer one at a time!
• Sound effects added for certain situations.
• Music for every scene mixed and made by me

Upcoming in 1.1a (non chapter patch)

• More sound effects
• Custom GUI (hopefully)
• New Text boxes and Text Font
• and More!

Okay I really would love to hear what people think of the story so far!. Its about 30 - 35 mins roughly depending on your reading speed!

I am for about 2 hours with 3 Chapters. Possibly 4 when the final game is completed.

Depending on how hard it is to code I may add Branching paths or choices In the future.

This is my first time using Renpy. I started on 30th of June. So I have not done too badly.

Anyway Feedback is needed and Please. Please share if you like it.

Thanks a million

Regards

Andy

Aka Thefreedyshow